Get Assistance to Improve the Substance of Your Book
You may have completed your first draft, or you're still working on it. You need help to develop your ideas, shape your story, and craft your writing. You're not sure what's working and what's not. Is it the plot or the characters that need tweaking? Does the story need more conflict or more emotion? Is the dialogue believable? What are your strengths, and what elements of the craft do you need to work on? Is your writing too passive, or too flowery? Is your language effective?
These are the kinds of questions a comprehensive edit can answer for you.